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The Saving Grace

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She’d dozed off, she didn’t know when. Perhaps, the Jack Daniels previous night had been too much.
She slid the curtain to let in just a glimmer of sunlight.

In the balcony, he leaned against the parapet.
She offered a silent gratitude for his presence.

If not for him, she would’ve given up long back.

Written by Sangfroid

May 26, 2011 at 7:45 am

Posted in iWrite

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  1. ~ smiles!! oh of many a hungover morning… story of my life!


    May 26, 2011 at 10:07 am

  2. oh, it’s so cute!!!:)

    mushyness is rarity in ur posts πŸ˜€ , like it when you change it up a lil πŸ™‚


    May 26, 2011 at 1:31 pm

  3. Why do I find this piece bittersweet?

    Sanctity of the relationship vs. sanity. Looks like sanity lost the race.


    May 26, 2011 at 7:45 pm

  4. Having enjoyed the story, at this moment, I would like to act very finicky and blame the 55 restriction on making the last sentence seem grammatically weird – “she’d given up” … isn’t it supposed to be ‘would have’, or something? πŸ˜›


    May 27, 2011 at 2:36 am

    • Edited πŸ™‚ And it is still 55!

      I myself wasn’t so convinced with the she’d but let it be.


      May 30, 2011 at 9:46 am

  5. Request: Can I have longer posts on similar..
    Not a critique (quite the contrary): Your posts leave me wondering what happened after or did something happen at all.


    May 27, 2011 at 9:17 am

    • Your request shall be granted!
      I’ve been contemplating on short stories but somehow find myself stuck at 55 πŸ™‚


      May 30, 2011 at 9:47 am

  6. Somehow I did not find the mushy feeling here πŸ™‚

    What I concluded after the 55 was that she looked out – saw that the cook/cleaning guy/handyman had come back from his vacation and felt happy πŸ˜›

    See this is why you need to write short-stories πŸ˜€


    May 30, 2011 at 1:10 pm

    • Or even her pup! πŸ™‚

      Short Stories, yes I’d love to. Soon, maybe!


      June 9, 2011 at 1:00 am

  7. oh sigh.

    meghana naidu

    June 28, 2011 at 9:01 pm

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