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Under The Weight

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She was an incorrigible fitness freak. Her target of achieving the perfect bod was nigh approaching.
She was elated.

He was upset. He missed her voluptuous form.

So, she went under the knife.
He was happy.

Back at the gym, they felt too heavy.
She was distraught. She went under the knife again.

They broke up.

Written by Sangfroid

September 24, 2010 at 11:49 am

Posted in iWrite

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  1. Their love was knifed through by the fitness regime.
    OR
    Their love was weighed down by the knives!
    OR
    Their love was not fit enough to survive the sometimes heavy, and sometimes edgy expectations.

    Choose your comment πŸ™‚

    Kunal

    September 24, 2010 at 12:28 pm

  2. The issue of the ‘dumbbells’ πŸ˜›

    mythalez

    September 24, 2010 at 1:04 pm

  3. love in times of silicon! πŸ˜‰

    Aneesha

    September 24, 2010 at 6:52 pm

  4. And she started dating a knifewala πŸ˜€

    winniethepoohi

    October 15, 2010 at 4:15 pm


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