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Maximum City – The First Rain

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When she stepped out of the restaurant, a pleasant breeze had her tresses go haywire. Tying them into a bun, she noticed the wet ground.

She was upset. She’d missed her first Mumbai rain.
Plugging in her iPod, she began walking.

People ran helter-skelter. Grinning broadly, she checked her pace.

And rain came pelting down.

Written by Sangfroid

June 7, 2010 at 11:41 pm

Posted in iWrite, Mumbai

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  1. dekho baarish ho rahi hai! 😀 😀


    June 7, 2010 at 11:53 pm

  2. the first line was poetic, dramatic & romantic sorts!! 😛



    June 8, 2010 at 2:14 pm

  3. The first rain is always dramatic 😀

    Winnie the Poohi

    June 22, 2010 at 11:45 pm

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