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Baby, One More Time

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Moving his fingers from her shoulder to her wrist, he asked her to put her tiny hand in his.
She looked up, now facing him. Reassurance was what she sought in his eyes.

He solemnly said – Look. I can’t marry you.
She recoiled. He pulled her upon himself.

They made love for the last time.

Written by Sangfroid

March 3, 2010 at 11:16 pm

Posted in iWrite

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  1. Well..all good things must come to an end that is also good.

    Bird

    March 4, 2010 at 7:03 am

    • Food for thought 🙂

      Welcome here … Bird!

      Sangfroid

      March 5, 2010 at 2:03 am

    • Thanks :). I hope you dont mind me tagging you.

      Bird

      March 6, 2010 at 2:18 am

  2. I think the ‘tiny hand’ phrase made pedophilia reverberate in my head. I read the first line as though a child and a man were involved.

    Politicolegal

    March 4, 2010 at 10:19 am

  3. I think the ‘tiny hand’ phrase made pedophilia reverberate in my head. I read the first line as though a child and a man were involved.

    Jil Jil Ramamani

    March 4, 2010 at 10:19 am

    • LOL.
      Nope. Jacko is dead! Bad joke, I know.

      So are the two of you … umm identical twins? 🙂

      Sangfroid

      March 5, 2010 at 2:05 am

  4. Oops I did it again.. 😛 😛

    (keeping up with my movie phase.. a song this time..)

    vo afasana jise anjaam tak laana naa ho mumakin,
    usse ek khubasurat mord dekar chhordana acha.

    Meena

    March 4, 2010 at 1:58 pm


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