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Maximum City – The Pigeon Hole Principle

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The flat she’d moved in was semi-furnished which meant there was no air-conditioning. To beat the heat, she opened the window. She was busy unpacking. She heard a flutter.

With trepidation, it rapidly moved its eyelids and stood motionless in a corner. She was enamored by it.

Residents hated the creature.
She befriended them effortlessly.

Written by Sangfroid

February 24, 2010 at 12:00 am

Posted in iWrite, Mumbai

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  1. There is small difference ‘tween your story and Dork’s.


    February 24, 2010 at 8:07 am

    • Frankly speaking, I haven’t read Dork still but the narrative is very tongue in cheek and as matter of fact. It does happen like that I guess.


      February 26, 2010 at 1:51 am

  2. Pigeons. Gah!! >:-{

    Jil Jil Ramamani

    February 24, 2010 at 2:37 pm

    • Welcome here Jil Jil!

      You don’t like them? Couldn’t make much out of ‘Gah’ although the emoticon tells the tale πŸ™‚


      February 26, 2010 at 1:52 am

  3. defntly pigeons!!! reminds me of hostel days.. would sleep with the balcony door open to ‘beat the heat’ and lo and behold every morning would find 1 or 2 sitting on me peacefully!


    February 24, 2010 at 2:59 pm

    • You meant ‘shitting’ didnt you?


      February 25, 2010 at 12:20 pm

    • LOL @ Meena’s comment πŸ˜›


      February 26, 2010 at 1:53 am

  4. Its nice to see your daily life getting reflected on your writing.
    Its been a while since I visited this place πŸ™‚



    February 24, 2010 at 4:24 pm

    • Welcome again Sookie!

      Not really a reflection. Just some tidbits of inspiration I say πŸ™‚


      February 26, 2010 at 1:54 am

  5. i second jil jil and the other residents – gaH, pigeons!!


    February 24, 2010 at 9:38 pm

    • So even you don’t like them.
      To tell you the truth, I hate them too.

      That damn thing broke my shot glasses the other day 😐


      February 26, 2010 at 1:56 am

  6. I have a bunch of them..they feed out of my hand. πŸ™‚


    February 25, 2010 at 12:19 am

    • I’ll send you a video and you’ll stop doing that in all probability πŸ™‚


      February 26, 2010 at 1:56 am

  7. Try going to kabutar khana in dadar πŸ™‚

    And may be make them fly altogether..

    but you know what I miss the most? teenie weenie sparrows. They seem to have disappeared!


    February 25, 2010 at 12:21 pm

    • Noted.

      I saw one the other day. It seemed out of place πŸ™‚


      February 26, 2010 at 1:57 am

  8. @ sangfroid and @ Meena: πŸ˜€ i stick to sitting!!!


    February 26, 2010 at 5:48 pm

  9. The geek in you is evident from the title πŸ™‚


    March 3, 2010 at 5:50 pm

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