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The Last Local

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From the auto, he saw her running out of the Maratha. In the blink of an eye, she was beside him. The next local train was due in, precisely, thirteen minutes. Ten minutes later, at the station, he saw her disappear into the crowd.

Six months later, his prayer was answered. She missed the local.

Written by Sangfroid

February 9, 2010 at 11:31 pm

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  1. Six months for a prayer to be answered? Your protagonist has some patience πŸ˜›


    February 10, 2010 at 1:18 pm

    • I know. Wanted to edit it to ‘a week ot so’ but comments flowed in before then πŸ˜›


      February 13, 2010 at 11:22 pm

  2. And on her ring finger he spotted a ring


    February 10, 2010 at 3:05 pm

    • LOL! πŸ˜€
      Welcome here, Ramya!
      Do you blog too ?


      February 13, 2010 at 11:23 pm

  3. πŸ™‚


    February 10, 2010 at 10:56 pm

  4. ahem .. so ur protagonist is an auto-driver? πŸ˜›
    i had to read thrice to come to this conclusion πŸ˜›


    February 11, 2010 at 2:14 am

    • LOL!
      He is a ‘some’ professional πŸ™‚


      February 13, 2010 at 11:24 pm

  5. Reminds me of shiney in Life in a metro and umm shilpa πŸ™‚

    Winnie the Poohi

    February 11, 2010 at 7:46 am

    • hmm … I see.
      What can I say? I’ve seen the movie and I believe I liked it too but don’t recall any resemblance 😐


      February 13, 2010 at 11:24 pm

  6. The city’s making you filmy.. πŸ˜‰


    February 13, 2010 at 9:20 am

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