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Distant Dilemma

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She broke down when he disclosed. He explained that it won’t work. She was adamant.

She turned recluse, grew miserable over the week.

The horoscope hinted at it being a great day for long-distance communication. Another advice was to – Do something to look good.

She looked into the mirror. She bathed.

His number was unreachable.

Written by Sangfroid

January 22, 2010 at 6:40 pm

Posted in iWrite

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  1. I am dumbfounded … was she an idiot or a fool πŸ˜€

    Tarun

    January 22, 2010 at 7:18 pm

  2. ~ she was a parasite!

    Ani

    January 22, 2010 at 8:11 pm

  3. et tu bejan daruwala πŸ™‚

    mentalie

    January 22, 2010 at 11:31 pm

  4. πŸ™‚ Back to being morbid huh…

    My take, as usual. (I hope you don’t mind me doing this. It’s too good to pass!)

    She broke down when he disclosed. He explained that long distance relationships didn’t usually work.
    After a fortnight, her hair tangled in knots and her brain cobwebbed.
    The horoscope hinted at the day being great for long-distance communication. Another advice was to – Do something to look good.
    She took a shower.
    His number was unreachable.

    Sookie

    January 25, 2010 at 3:47 pm

  5. And at the last line I laughed loud enough for my colleagues to turn and stare at me πŸ˜›

    Kunal

    January 25, 2010 at 7:18 pm

  6. tsk tsk! Poor soul!

    Meena

    January 30, 2010 at 4:01 pm


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