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Artificial Indulgence

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The hall was almost empty. Without checking their tickets, they took to a corner. They did their thing for the next hour.

When the movie got over, she got sullen. Her locket was missing.
He smiled. He saw the tiny thing struggling between her well-endowed bazooms. He fished it out.

The silicone bit stood confirmed.

Written by Sangfroid

January 21, 2010 at 9:59 am

Posted in iWrite

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  1. They could have booked a small hotel room for same price more freedom 😛

    Tarun

    January 21, 2010 at 10:02 am

  2. 😀

    I agree with Tarun.

    Sookie

    Sookie

    January 21, 2010 at 10:06 am

  3. yeah..! agrees with Tarun and Sookie!

    Ani

    January 21, 2010 at 11:34 am

  4. Dude I bet impossible im PVRs and Inox. Neways male fantasies are unbound

    Gautam

    January 21, 2010 at 12:10 pm

  5. it seems all commentators are in agreement 🙂

    Kunal

    January 21, 2010 at 1:00 pm

    • And so you choose to not comment as comment 😛

      Sangfroid

      January 21, 2010 at 4:50 pm

  6. just one hour movie??? 😛

    mythalez

    January 21, 2010 at 1:19 pm

    • Ever heard of the ‘censor scissors’? 😛

      Sangfroid

      January 21, 2010 at 4:51 pm

  7. eh! after all that action for a whole hour, it took the locket to help him figure out?!

    mentalie

    January 21, 2010 at 3:28 pm

    • The most pertinent observation. You read me well 🙂

      He was (un)sure. This confirmed it for him. You know what I mean 😉

      Sangfroid

      January 21, 2010 at 4:54 pm

  8. Could not help but write this 😀 (Being back to work sucks.)

    The hall was almost empty. Without checking their tickets, they took to a corner. They did their thing for the next hour.
    When the movie got over, she got sullen. Her locket was missing.
    He saw it stuck amidst two rows of black and gold; like an illusion caught amidst reality.

    Their guilt mirrored.

    🙂

    Sookie

    January 21, 2010 at 3:52 pm

  9. Nice take !! the end was perfect 🙂

    still wondering how he was unsure about it 😉

    Prats

    January 21, 2010 at 5:01 pm


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