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Hold Your Breath

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While bidding adieu, he persuaded her to remove her helmet. The moment she did so, he pecked her on the cheek. She looked shocked. She rode away without saying a word.

He kicked his bike in despair.
I should not have hurried! – he thought.

Later that night, his phone beeped.
I hate onions – read the message.

Written by Sangfroid

January 17, 2010 at 11:15 am

Posted in iWrite

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  1. Hhhaa..no wonders I’ve been missing your 55s all this while. πŸ™‚

    sam

    January 17, 2010 at 11:46 am

    • And this blog was missing you *cheeky grin* πŸ˜›

      Sangfroid

      January 17, 2010 at 8:24 pm

  2. hahahahahaha….he should have had garlic…

    Tarun

    January 17, 2010 at 12:33 pm

  3. lolzzzzzzzzz…

    pj

    January 17, 2010 at 1:15 pm

  4. He still has hope then!

    Mridula

    January 17, 2010 at 2:46 pm

  5. hehe! LOL!

    notmanish

    January 17, 2010 at 4:18 pm

  6. well.. just desserts! πŸ˜‰

    Ani

    January 17, 2010 at 8:23 pm

  7. she’d get over the onions if she was into him.

    mentalie

    January 18, 2010 at 12:19 am

  8. Cute πŸ™‚

    Winnie the poohi

    January 18, 2010 at 12:26 pm

  9. Geez…

    I wonder what would have happened if he had drank a liter of soft drink?

    Sookie

    January 18, 2010 at 5:36 pm

  10. i hate onions – read the message.
    The optimist in me says..she’s giving him another chance πŸ˜‰ (sans onions though this time)

    Jasmeet

    January 19, 2010 at 10:29 am

  11. rofl! he should convert to Jainism and leave garlic and onions next time onwards πŸ™‚

    Kunal

    January 19, 2010 at 12:35 pm


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