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Kick The Butt

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Your teeth are stained. Who will marry you? – mourned her Mom, enrolling her for a popular workshop.

After a week of abstinence, she spotted her instructor smoking hookah at a joint.
Infuriated, she confronted him, asking her money back.

He refused. Snatching his pipe, she shrieked.
On her way out, she kicked his butt hard.

Written by Sangfroid

January 16, 2010 at 9:44 am

Posted in iWrite

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  1. Typo …the first word shd be Your πŸ˜›


    January 16, 2010 at 11:36 am

    • πŸ™‚ Edited. Thanks!
      But did you like the story, P ?


      January 16, 2010 at 11:41 am

  2. stained teeth from smoking???? She might be eating tobacco..reminded me of hindi couplet

    “Jo chale the aaj hame daruu se dooor karne, aaj unhi ke jaeb se pouva nikla”


    January 16, 2010 at 11:52 am

    • Smoking, Tobacco and the likes πŸ™‚

      And the ‘pouva’ couplet is great πŸ˜€


      January 16, 2010 at 11:54 am

  3. reminds me of a lecture my chain smoking uncle once gave me. i didn’t kick his butt…but i did go on smoke 30-40 cigarettes a day for the next 12 years. nice story, sangfroid.


    January 16, 2010 at 5:01 pm

    • 30-40 a day! hmm … that ain’t much πŸ˜›

      Glad that you liked the story πŸ™‚


      January 17, 2010 at 11:29 am

  4. ~ laughs!! πŸ˜€ luvd the butt kicking!


    January 16, 2010 at 5:24 pm

  5. I wonder why people with brains like to destroy their lungs! But then I know I know it is their choice!


    January 16, 2010 at 9:18 pm

  6. You sure it was due to smoking and not due to not following the brushing regime.. πŸ˜‰


    January 17, 2010 at 11:55 am

  7. Now no one will marry her 😦

    Winnie the poohi

    January 18, 2010 at 12:25 pm

    • ummm … why? Some like it yellow πŸ™‚


      January 18, 2010 at 2:13 pm

  8. hmm…teeth stains could be always because of obscene amount of espresso intake πŸ˜€

    Whatever. Hilarious as usual.


    January 18, 2010 at 5:34 pm

  9. “kicked his butt hard” .. now that is a unique ending πŸ˜›


    January 19, 2010 at 12:31 pm

    • To tell you the truth, the ‘hard’ was added to make it 55 πŸ˜›


      January 19, 2010 at 7:47 pm

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