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The Slip

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In his stealthy effort to surprise her, the ring slipped out of his palms and drowned in the sea.
Gasping, he let out a sigh. All courage that he’d mustered to finally confess his love, evaporated. She waited but the words never came.

Dejectedly, she called her Mom – I’m ready to marry whoever you say.

Written by Sangfroid

November 9, 2009 at 11:55 pm

Posted in iWrite

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  1. Aww..but why didn’t she say it then..


    November 10, 2009 at 9:04 am

  2. nice one 🙂

    you know I just now penned a short story and there are many similar shades to this one..

    guess the adage is true – great minds do think alike 😛


    November 10, 2009 at 11:57 am

    • Great Minds! I don’t indulge in self-praise but if you say so … 😛

      And your stories are much awaited.


      November 11, 2009 at 10:53 am

  3. How silly! If it was me .. i wudnt wait for him to muster courage 🙂

    Winnie the Poohi

    November 10, 2009 at 4:29 pm

  4. And then both will repent in leisure!


    November 10, 2009 at 10:35 pm

  5. oh man… ouch

    this a real good one


    November 13, 2009 at 9:47 am

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