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Closure

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It’d been a year since they parted ways but the sms’ never ceased. She was stuck. He had moved on. They, sometimes, talked. He never made the call though. She pleaded on catching up. He obliged. They made love at her apartment.

Unable to zero-in on a closure mechanism, he has now resorted to apathy.


Edited to remove the F-word. Had used it in the first place to fit the story in 55 words. It appeared crass I was told, hence the change.

Written by Sangfroid

June 29, 2009 at 10:00 am

Posted in iWrite

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  1. strange how some people refuse to move on but go through the pain all time !

    lostmermaid

    June 29, 2009 at 10:16 am

    • Guess it is hard for some! And some people never change. But change is the only constant 😛

      Sangfroid

      June 29, 2009 at 9:02 pm

  2. apathy – the solution to everything, apart from your own problems ..

    Kunal

    June 29, 2009 at 11:25 am

  3. Again, the defination of closure varies..

    sam

    June 29, 2009 at 11:30 am

    • Yes. of course it does. It was closure for him and not so for her!

      Sangfroid

      June 29, 2009 at 9:03 pm

  4. Sad thing this! I wish everyone could move on easily! Poor girl!

    Winnie the Poohi

    June 29, 2009 at 3:40 pm

  5. Is this a true story? Why is everyone so serious 😛 ??
    Poor girl, some times people give so much of importance to unworthy people !!

    yankeedoodles

    July 1, 2009 at 11:17 am

    • One person’s fiction could be someones reality 🙂
      Yea, sometimes!

      Sangfroid

      July 1, 2009 at 6:54 pm


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