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Close Shave

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Rick caressed her by the waist as they walked in. He was thrilled being with this stunning escort.

A couple of drinks down saw them lip-locking. The dim lights spurred Rick on, to make his moves.
He slid his hand under her gown, only to jump back in horror.

Alarmed, he ran for his life.

Written by Sangfroid

March 6, 2009 at 10:30 pm

Posted in iWrite

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  1. Nooo!

    You were finally writing the kind of story i like. Why did you have to stop with that nasty twist?


    March 7, 2009 at 8:21 am

    • Parry, does this mean you never liked my 55s before this 😦 Anyways, I’ll come up with more such tingling ones πŸ˜›


      March 7, 2009 at 7:08 pm

    • no. I liked your earlier stories as well. I just like these more.

      Keep β€˜em coming!


      March 9, 2009 at 7:44 am

  2. rofl..

    I think I saw that coming 40 words earlier πŸ˜›


    March 7, 2009 at 10:47 am

    • hehehe … Predictability is boring! But guess will do some more on similar lines for Parry’s sake πŸ˜›


      March 7, 2009 at 7:10 pm

  3. πŸ˜€ Funny!! πŸ™‚


    March 7, 2009 at 2:12 pm

  4. nice twist πŸ™‚

    aNoop aka --xh--

    March 7, 2009 at 9:18 pm

  5. [mad laugh] Waaa haaaa haaaaaaaaaaaaa [/mad laugh]

    too funny for words πŸ˜€


    March 23, 2009 at 9:51 am

  6. KICK ASS!!!




    March 27, 2009 at 2:42 pm

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