Pandora’s Box
She woke up next to him. Previous night was a blur. She cursed the non-functioning anti-hangover pill. Later when the impregnation bit surfaced, she packed her bags and disappeared into oblivion.
Now with her daughters wedding just a week away, she feels a sudden pinch to meet the father. She, however, rightly curbs her desires.
nice, nice…
you have been writing so effortlessly with the female’s perspective.. I tried it once or twice, was never able to do any justice to whatever I wrote – felt fake. Have stuck to writing from a guy’s perspective only.
Kunal
June 28, 2009 at 4:06 PM
Now that you mention it, I think I have been actually
Wondering if all is hunky dory with me ?
Sangfroid
June 29, 2009 at 2:47 AM
that was super
mentalie
June 29, 2009 at 12:28 AM
Thank You!
Sangfroid
June 29, 2009 at 2:47 AM
Niceee.. those 55 words are enough to tell a complete story and leave one wondering too!! Very effective..
sam
June 29, 2009 at 9:18 AM
Thank You Madame
Sangfroid
June 29, 2009 at 9:01 PM
Good for her to curb her desires ! You write good stuff …
lostmermaid
June 29, 2009 at 10:17 AM
Danke!!
Sangfroid
June 29, 2009 at 9:02 PM
hunky dory eh? I think you should be proud of it
Winnie the Poohi
June 29, 2009 at 3:43 PM
Thanks. It feels nice
Sangfroid
June 29, 2009 at 9:04 PM